Friday 30 October 2009

Tinned Veg critique

I think I got a lot out of today's critique, I also liked the feedback, as it was a lot more constructive to critiques I have been in before... Going first in the group had it's positives because I think I got a lot more of a class input than I would if I was towards the end. Some points I picked up from the Crit were:

  • The logo was too harsh and I should make it smaller.
  • The faces I made out of food were to small and I should make them bigger.
  • I should keep all the logo's the same colour, instead of having one yellow to keep the continuity.
  • When fitting the label on the tin make sure the type doesn't go around the corners.

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