final crit. web

I had my crit today, and although I was confident going into it, I got a lot of constructive criticism, which gave me an indication of how much work I had to do, so I was a bit nervous coming out of it. The stuff I had gone over with my tutor before christmas hadn't actually been done, the gallery need to be completely re-thought as it wasn't rally working for the other people in my class and the typography was the worst bit, when someone commented 'it looked like WW2 type,' which was true, and I knew this was where I would need to make the biggest changes.

So I have quite a bit to get on with, as the deadline is coming ever closer...